Blurb (from Good Reads)
The perfect man is out there . . . he just needs a little work.
Slave to the rich, rude and deluded, cosmetic surgery receptionist Serenity Holland longs for the day she’s a high-flying tabloid reporter. Unfortunately, every pitch she sends out disappears like her clients’ liposuctioned fat, never to be seen again. Then she meets Jeremy Ritchie — the hang-dog man determined to be Britain’s Most Eligible Bachelor by making himself over from head to toe and everything in between — giving Serenity a story no editor could resist.
With London’s biggest tabloid on board and her very own column tracking Jeremy’s progress from dud to dude, Serenity is determined to be a success, even going undercover to gain intimate access to Jeremy’s life. But when Jeremy’s surgery goes drastically wrong and Serenity is ordered to cover all the car-crash goriness, she must decide how far she really will go for her dream job.
My thoughts
I’ve been a follower of Talli Roland’s blog since I joined the blogosphere, and her books have been on my to-read list for quite some time. I expected Build a Man to be a light read with liberal doses of romance and humour throughout, and my expectations were pretty much on the money.
However, I wasn’t expecting to be quite so irritated by the main character, Serenity. She makes so many selfish decisions and her justifications are more transparent than glass. Honestly, I just wanted to reach inside the book, shake her and say, ‘Wake up to yourself, woman!’ Thankfully, the plot did that for me. I won’t say any more so I don’t spoil the story, but I was pleased to see Serenity being forced to wake up to herself. In saying that, I thought Serenity’s character growth was a little too easy, kind of like flipping a switch.
But, overall, I still enjoyed Build a Man. There’s great variety in the personalities of the support cast, and some of the scenes at the cosmetic surgery clinic had me giggling and raising my (non-botoxed) eyebrows. The descriptions of London were really well crafted and made me feel like I was right there on the street or in the pub beside Serenity.˜ I’m looking forward to reading the sequel, Construct a Couple, and hopefully seeing some of my favourite plot lines from Build a Man develop further.
(On the subject of reviews, Andrew Leon of Strange Pegs has written some thought-provoking posts on the importance of honest reviews – including negative ones – for self published books, called “Is It Better To Be “Nice” Or Honest?”. Have a read and let me know what you think. I agree with him, to a point…)
My rating of Build a Man
What’s your opinion?
Have you read Build a Man? If so, what did you think? If not, do you plan to?
My 1-5 scale
1: Terrible. I couldn’t finish it.
2: Dissatisfying.
3: Good but not great.
3.5: A solid, enjoyable read but still some elements not working for me.
4: Really enjoyable with very few flaws OR flawed, but I loved it anyway.
4.5: Unputdownable. Close to perfect. I’ll rave about it to anyone who listens.
5: Perfection (i.e. pretty much unattainable).



Cally, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my novel!
I really appreciate it.
You’re very welcome, Talli. Thanks for commenting! I started *Construct a Couple* today, and I’m looking forward to diving into it on the train ride home!
Wonderful review. I’ve read Andrew’s “review” posts. I agree with about half of what he says.
I saw your comments in the stream on Andrew’s blog. You and I have reasonably similar views on the subject, from what I can tell.
I’ve had this on my Kindle for a while but I mostly read YA and MG so I haven’t gotten to it yet. Thanks for the honest review. I look forward to seeing whether Serenity bothers me as much, too. LOL!
Looking forward to hearing what you think of Build a Man. We can share thoughts when you’re done!
I’ve got this book on my Kindle already, but haven’t read it yet. Thanks for your review! And I checked out that guest post on whether to write good or honest reviews. Thought-provoking
Looking forward to hearing what you think of Build a Man. We can share thoughts when you’re done.
And yep, Andrew’s posts are very thought provoking. It will be interesting to see how the industry develops in that regard.